Broken Promise World Poem by Sandra jacks

Broken Promise World



I live in a,
broken promise world,
I know all promises must be lies,
otherwise people would,
keep them,
now and again.

I live in a,
broken promise world,
That says one thing,
does another,
doesn't complete,
what i hope it would.
and i put my trust in this,
broken promise world,
but i do not believe in this,
broken place,
i call home.

Oh.......no............. no

You see in my mind,
I'm elsewhere,
flowers,
yellow lilies ponds,
grass,
green,
lake,
bluest crisp waters,
beauty in bugs,
skies of angels eyes and,
calmness,
and a freedom,
unexplainable freedom,
peaceful.

I live in a world,
of broken promises,
but i see a world of,
hope and,
life and,
happiness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikia Chesney 13 January 2009

Great piece. I can relate to this one. And I really like how you ended it, with hope, not more despair.

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