Broken Promise Poem by Amber Cage

Broken Promise

Rating: 5.0


Its honed and gleaming pieces,
Cut me deep inside.
It slashes both my heart and psyche,
And “love” that already died!

Love that I tended so fondly,
Was viciously trodden.
Love of years,
Blew away so sudden.

There is no returning home now,
As I finally choose my avenue.
This time it’s far away,
Away from you.

“It” was not to end like this,
Our life would have been bliss,
But storyline changed…
All ‘coz of your broken promise!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great Write. You are very talented. Keep writing.

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John Woodhouse 18 October 2008

Well I must say I feel your emotion coming through here. A very enjoyable read, well done!

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