Broken Love Poem by gabby chamberland

Broken Love

Rating: 4.0


Behind closed eyes
I wish to see
Why you despise
So much of me

I try and surmise
Is this how it’s meant to be?
Your eyes drown mine
not so sentimentally

how could this be?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MuSiC HeaD 01 April 2009

i really liked this one... good work =)

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Sunset moonshine 06 April 2009

I like this.. the great thing bout love is that there is always more people out there for you... always keep your head held high! ! ! ! Love this piece... *(*_*) *

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OuSs@Ma Samouna 12 April 2009

this is a nice poem, i like it alot true feelings man! ! ! keep up the good work.

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Jacky Dorantes 15 August 2009

'your eyes drown mines...not sentimentally'. I love these two lines. good job!

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Suicidal Magic 31 May 2009

really good! ! i like your work also and thank you XD

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Irene Clark-hogg 10 May 2009

The gentle flow and rhyming in this poem is a delight. Well done. Irene

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Cailey Horn 13 April 2009

i really love this poem! please keep writing :)

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 13 April 2009

Well written - good question...how does one know what the other thinks...will watch your work.

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