Broken Life Poem by Kaede Rirunaru

Broken Life

Rating: 5.0


I always lie,
Lie about my home, Lie about my insanity,
I always being alone for all this year,
Don't know why, no one can't bring me home,

Father so far, Mother don't cry,
Sister so bad, and no one in my side,
Oh, there is always smoke,
Embitter mine, swhated wound,

Boyfriend throw me to hell,
Only awakened the madness,
Bloody tears come out,
Only burned that crazy memories,

Lot of friends, like innocent,
But always stab me from back,
Oh, forsake me just for their worth,
And again, I fall behind,

God, are you there?
Still can't hear you even I pray,
And never satisfied only just take a bow,
Hope can out this crowded,

I've tasted that all the scar,
Cause it's all my lie, weight world that I can prop,
Even just word, I know there's always the truth,
They all still here, God gave gift, Friend to held,
Boyfriend can healed, and Family went reunion...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 09 December 2008

a very beautiful write with lots of pain and yearings...in the end hope to be every thing right again....keep on holding the sring of hope, like i do, and soon you'll find happiness...thanks for sharing 10++++++ and A+++++++ rgds asif

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

awh im so touchhhhhhhhhed --your broken life dont lose hope God is there--believe in him a nice write --A++++++ anjali

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Joseph Poewhit 12 December 2008

We all have things in our lives

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 December 2008

if we can believe in God, life is much easier to go through. interesting poem! keep writing!

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Min Sia 09 December 2008

Expressive poem..there's hatred..yet there's still hope sleeping within.. Wonderful words! Great write!

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Kite Remedy 09 December 2008

life sure is hard, but that's why we also have hope, right? expressive poem..

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Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
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