Broken Heart Poem by Scentless Apprentice

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


you cant picture what woulde be,
If we would live in eternity,
I'm despratly in need,
of my mothers hand, in a welcome land,

But now I know,
your picture,
doesnt include me, its a perfect house,
with a loving family,
Yes I cried,
cried my eyes out for some days,

And I knew what you would say,
Kept myself together for the rest of the day,

You could be there,
close to me,
but now we will see,

you're so far away,

I wish you would be here,
I cant face another day,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Isabel Oropeza 28 July 2008

wow. you really paint a motion picture with your words. great job. please check out some of my poetry. and i give your poem a 10. excellent job. Be Different. Be You. best of luck! Elizabeth

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