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Broken

I can't think of an even more beautiful gem than a diamond itself
A pearl can only come so close
This gorgeous manifestation shall be followed by a grand wedding
Soft lingering kisses
Oh it's great to be alive!
An eternity of yellow ribbons awaken my reality
Bells ringing in my head as if the Queen of England has arrived
An outpour of emotion shivers my fingertips
I can't wait to get married! I want you now!
Whoever you shall be
Lost skies in the distance of each other's eyes
I find it to be quite overwhelming
Yet love can be this mentally paralyzed devil that haunts the soul
Who am I?
Completely broken and unsure of myself
The future seems to lead me astray
To let go is the hardest thing in the world
But I'm not afraid to be free
For what it's worth
Walking down the aisle can be a dream come true

Losing my heart to someone means everything
Tangled up in a fantasy that doesn't really fill the void
I am a woman but you don't seem to notice
I'm not as curvy as Marilyn Monroe.

Submitted: Wednesday, January 15, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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Everyday I look at the world outside of my window. Don't judge me. I had to let go of Kane Whittaker and I am very sad. This is not what I wanted. I loved him very much and I'm driving myself insane. He said he didn't love me.

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  • Amitava Sur (2/15/2014 12:41:00 AM)

    A lovely write with romantic dreams with heart break as well... life is like that only... wish you to have a Kane to make a happy end.

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  • marvin brato (1/20/2014 3:30:00 PM)

    Amazing write...romance may not be perfect, but its moments shared can be lovely!

  • * Sunprincess * (1/16/2014 4:20:00 PM)

    .......oh that is sad b.v...but I know one thing for sure.. there is a brighter star than kane whittaker
    out there somewhere and you are destined to find him

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/16/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    Rich in a rabid realism that is refreshing.Well done my friend

  • Kanav Justa (1/16/2014 11:41:00 AM)

    thats sad, , , its hard to get over from situations like these, , , , but this is the way life goes on, , , one day everthing gets fine like it never happend, , , ,
    this is a beautiful poem

  • Sandra Feldman (1/15/2014 11:14:00 PM)

    Beauteous Victory,
    Cannot only write,
    Like few that I know,
    But also create,
    A mystic Mystery,
    Of Poetic glow,
    Where words and images
    Just grow and grow.......

    This poem is devastatingly beautiful and great. I like it all but my preferred line is,
    Yet love can be this mentally paralyzed devil that haunts the soul

  • Beach Girl (1/15/2014 6:36:00 AM)

    BV, what a touching poem! It conveys such a fervent desire for love and eventual marriage. I especially loved the line ' Lost skies in the distance of each other's eyes
    I find it to be quite overwhelming
    Yet love can be this mentally paralyzed devil that haunts the soul
    Who am I? '

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