Breeze Poem by Subbaraman N V

Breeze

Rating: 5.0


Breeze a great gift of nature
Embraces every one in its course
Cares not one's position or status
Treats all as equal sure of course!

God's grace showered on all
Cares not one is short or tall
Animate or inanimate
To one and all He is intimate!

Nature never discriminates
Nor its laws ever remonstrates
Ugly mind of the cruel man
Alone knows the art of scan
To inflict injuries on the innocent
And shower benefits to those with influence!

Cruel it is the honest suffers
Unfair it is the opposite prospers
How to end this nasty goings
And bring peace and poise in all the beings?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gita Ashok 25 June 2010

Wonderful poem! The first and last stanzas are brilliant. I admire the way you have used 'breeze' as the theme and converted it into a philosophy of life.10+++++

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Mamta Agarwal 30 June 2008

nature is benevolent. a fine poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 13 June 2008

the honest may suffer for sin done in some other context... yudhishtira in the epic Maha Bharatha is one example. i liked the imagery of breeze as a universal soother well wisher...

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Duy Bui 04 April 2008

I agree! Very nicely put.

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Michael Fischer 02 January 2008

I really enjoyed this piece. Well thought out and executed. Top marks! -Michael

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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