Breaking My Love Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Breaking My Love

Rating: 5.0


I love you...
But you love another, .
And he loves you back.
Your bond has been strong.

I love you very much...
A feeling I cannot live without,
And I must do what I think is right;
To let go of the love you have for him.

I love you till the end...
Ardous emotion I will cherish,
In my heart I always hold you dear;
Even if this means breaking my love for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lee Degnan 12 September 2007

Pure love happens when one loves another selflessly, even if the other person does not have the same feelings, and still is able asks themselves 'what would make him/her happiest? '... This is hard to live through, such strong emotions that can tear at one's soul. You did a fine capture of such an instance, written with a stark reality of what truly is, and the fix to the dilemma, even if it means a love unfulfilled.... romantic indeed! Hugs, Lee

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Meggie Gultiano 04 September 2007

oh, Marvin, you are very romantic! you wrote this with depthness..thanks for this, friend love and hugs, Meggie

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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