Break Away Poem by David Sabo

Break Away

Rating: 4.5


I kind of feel like i broke away
broken clean
gone astray
forgotten
all the lovely things
that used to make me wanna stay

Im too old by now
im too young to tell
less privelidged
over zealous
you cant tell what the reason that i yell is

grown up broke
laugh before i choke
push before i fall
lean against the wall

I wont back down from you
never
I wont feel bad for you
ever

never ever
and forever
I hope for the better

I hope you get this letter
to remind you
I dont mind you

To remind you
Im right behind you.

Wach out.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diana Teo 30 January 2010

i like it good emotions

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Shelly Anne Burry 21 December 2009

i really like this poem.. its deep, it has a sense of imagery!

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Miranda Stoltz 18 December 2009

Awh, i enjoyed reading that. Great job. (:

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