Brave In Love (Being Inspired By Steep A Poem Of M.J. Lemon) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Brave In Love (Being Inspired By Steep A Poem Of M.J. Lemon)

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Difficult was the way to the mountain,
As I could not climb, I joined the immortal braves,
And I dived in the restless streams of a hot fountain,
I left myself on the mercy of the violent waves,
My mother kissed my forehead and sang,
My son will be cause of another big bang.

I see in my son the glimpses of Godly love,
He is evolving simultaneously in a fish and in a bird,
A swimming dolphin as well as a flying dove,
I know he will be tortured being the third!
But he will come again to write a love story,
On the top of the mountain you'll see its glory.

(That's what I learned from the life of Holy Jesus Christ)

Brave In Love (Being Inspired By Steep A Poem Of M.J. Lemon)
Friday, May 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: jesus,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A magnificent write full of wisdom. ''He will come again to write a love story, on the top of the mountain, you will see its glory.'' Beautiful lines of a great poem. Well executed write.10

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Mj Lemon 12 May 2018

A wonderful verse, Akhtar. So well, so perfectly, executed.

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Nudershada Cabanes 12 May 2018

A beautifully inspired poem Sir Akhtar ji. Wonderful execution.10

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Robert Murray Smith 11 May 2018

I liked this write. Well penned.+++10

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