Brave And Their Battles - Xiv Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Brave And Their Battles - Xiv

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I might rust, not rest,
And soon turn to junk in haste,
He said in half jest.
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A brave warrior on leave after live action on the front once said in some jest.
Inspired by India's Most Fearless (in two parts) by
Shiv Aroor & Rahul Singh
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Senryu | 29.12.2019|
Topic: life, death, wounds, brave, war, soldiers

Monday, December 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: soldier,war,work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 17 December 2019

I might rust in rest, And soon become junk in haste, He said in half jest. - - - - Great Haiku.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 December 2019

Thank you, rest is anathema to brave men of action.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 December 2019

A wonderful haiku sir! Thanks for sharing.......10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 December 2019

Wonderful feedback, I'd say, thank you so much.

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