We know each other
as a passerby
then you came to look for me
as a passerby
then you began to ask about me
as a part of your busy doing
then came that big moment
for you and me
i became part of your thoughts
unconsciously.....
© Sylvia Frances Chan
Saturday 12 November 2011 - 14.14 hrs
I became part of your thoughts unconsciously..True friendship or you may call relationship is destined! A wonderful write dear madam! Loved the sublime tone and tranquilizing influence of this magnificent piece of work…10
Interaction of one passerby with another is deeply observed and presented in this poem. Moment of thoughts is shared within each other through appearance and vibrations. The big moment by passerby is witnessed by though of appearance. This is very thoughtful poem shared here is interesting.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We know each other as a passerby then you came to look for me as a passerby then you began to ask about me as a part of your busy doing then came that big moment for you and me i became part of your thoughts unconsciously..... - - -Your emotions flow so sweetly in this short poem.