* * * Blowing Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Blowing

Rating: 3.3


BLOWING

The moon- homeless has found a hut
In Whites clouds....

Has strongly closed an ice door, and sleeps
Dreamt Deeply ...

But the wind does not give rest, to poor
- Blowing in windows...

On forehead silvery...
But the sun caresses opened in eyes...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 21 August 2009

And many screens, can be a home ...within this screan... Larger and the bee would.. and fill in each square... Low or high.. it is differant.. and as an octagon we.. compatible with the noon.. is moon in heavan....iip

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Fay Slimm 09 August 2009

Love this one Tsira my friend..... the picture of the moon closing an iced door is very poetic.....10 plus from Fay

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Catrina Heart 09 August 2009

cosmic theme...lovely innovative piece....Great!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 August 2009

the wind, moon and sun a lovely gathering...a lovely painting in very few words

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