Bloved Brother Poem by selam mussie

Bloved Brother

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The first born of the family
Brought happiness and prosperity
Even his name represents that
“Aklil” means “crown” in Tigrinya
He paid his life with no doubt
Stood for his people for his home land
Such a good brother and son
So young and a sweet one
Too unfair to be gone

How can I forget his smiley face
So cute and decent our family’s grace
Life has been too mean to you
Beloved brother I miss you

While I’m obsess through sadness
Realize if it weren’t you and the others
Paid life and brought this peace
We wouldn’t live and blithe
Not even be able to breath
Beloved brother, we all are proud of you
Even though we crazily missing you

The short good times we shared
Is what I deeply engraved
And I always miss that
“Aklilu” your memory is in my heart

Never thought life could be that short
You deserve to live and it really hurt
My beloved “Aklil” this poem is for you
I wanted the whole world to know you
I love you and I really miss you! ! ! !



N.B I wrote this poem for my brother who martyrs at the war between Eritrea and Ethiopia On May 17 2000 at the age of 24 in a specific place named Adi-rakba




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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 08 December 2009

“Aklilu” your memory is in my heart, wonderful tribute to your illustrious brother who could carry the nation`s flag ever fluttering with his unflinching loyalty onto his last breath, yet poignant as you lose him by his grace unequaled, utterly evocative, wonderful write,10+++, thanks for sharig

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Vijay Gupta 01 November 2008

You are lucky so having such graceful brother. Poetic style is fine.

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Jeanette Matthews 19 September 2008

I really like you poem and I know exactly how you feel you inspired me to write about a love one that I miss thank you for allowing me to read it.

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