Bloomer Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Bloomer

Rating: 5.0


Tied,
the bow-tie looks
like a butterfly,
and it's called that
in many tongues:
the French say papillon.

Unravelled,
each end resembles a thistle flower.
Some tongues call it that.

Unravelled, it looks
like a shoelace gone wrong/puffed up -
un lacet maltourne/bouffant -
in a word, a bloomer, une bourde.

I say, 'Probably, only MY tongue
has called it that.'

('bloomer' and 'bourde' -
'... called it those',
I suppose.)

Bloomer
Wednesday, October 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,clothing,language,mistake,ornament
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
bloomer: a blunder; a gaff; a silly or embarrassing mistake that does not have serious results
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2019

The tie looks like bow and the blowing tide motivates mind in amazing way. A thistle flower resembles mystery. An amazing informative poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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