Blood Undone Poem by Dark Dove

Blood Undone

Rating: 5.0


You say you loved me forever as one but then you left me with my blood undone...i was apart of you as you were of me... but now you got my heart crying out desperatly. you left my flesh in your hands and droped it on the old school vans then dumped it where the water was deep then stabed my back with tears down your check.. you say your sorry.. you say youll never leave but now im waiting for you but u still leave me in the there to sleep and never return to your dredful lies... now here i wait singing those pothedic lulibyes................ i love you dad even though you left me behind you said you can see but you still are blind... you told me you changed and youll do your best but your still in that sell writing me letters wishing me the best...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Haley Revell 03 November 2010

Wow, that is deep, . you must have been heartbroken. i can relate

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nina . 24 May 2010

this is beautiful. i can completley relate to what youre saying.

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