Blind Lover Poem by MUSAWIR RAAKH

Blind Lover

Rating: 4.9


No one to smile, no one to CRY
No one to walk, no one to FLY
No one to see, no one to SPY
Descrying fool's face in the MIRROR
That's how goes the BLIND LOVER

I would never know if she DIE
I have to believe if she LIE
Not even a thin cord to TIE
Her tears will never GLITTER
That's how goes the BLIND LOVER

What if she comes FACE to FACE
How would I know, I have no TRACE
Such miserable is my CASE
There is nothing I can COVER
That's how goes the BLIND LOVER

I am sick & tired of this blind GAME
I ran far away, but standing the SAME
Who is there, to take the BLAME
All I can write is just a LETTER
That's how goes the BLIND LOVER

Blind Lover
Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 12 October 2015

You are so lonely - it is felt by this poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 November 2015

That's how goes the BLIND LOVER The arrow of blind cupid makes all of us helpless. Jigar Muradabadi an Urdu poet, I quote, Muhabbat keya hay taseere muhabbat kisko kehte hayn, Tera majboor kar dena mera majboor ho jana. (What's love and what are its effects, your act of making helpless and my becoming helpless) .......................10

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Paul Warren 13 November 2015

Passionate telling of your feelings in this one

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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Loneliness is lying just beneath the surface of your words, touching our hearts with it's reluctance. Very well written, emotions and feelings standing upright and glaring at the blind lover. Succinct and beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Musawir Raakh 28 October 2015

Thanks for understanding my emotions, thanks for taking out your precious time dear

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Anita Sharma 22 October 2015

would never know if she DIE I have to believe if she LIE Not even a thin cord to TIE Her tears will never GLITTER That's how goes the BLIND LOVER.....such a deep write, emotions are restored, wonder if love like this last forever, , keep writing its brill write

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Musawir Raakh 12 October 2015

STILL NO BODY CARE DEAR LIZA

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