Blind Lover Poem by alfusainey Sonko

Blind Lover

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Thee avoided me
I have nothing to avoid
my heart is for ye
imagination started
when it began
thus my hard heart
never knew thy status

All thou do
busting my notes
I gave thee all
now that ye
dried my lips,
mouth is smelly
thus no lipspath

All thou do
made me ice
instead of wet
thus lonely ye gave
when lover night comes
all alone
any time thy not with time

All thou do
back to me
when broke over come ye
and when ye all
thou back away.
what friends truth me
object i always
thus lovesick
she never what i deserved
now invisible thus broken
now i'm aware
many are here to choose
I realized that
i'm not foolish
but doing foolish

Friday, November 23, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2019

now i'm aware many are here to choose I realized that i'm not foolish but doing foolish - a very good poem my dear poet. thank u. tony

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Yasmin Khan 10 April 2013

You have expressed your feeling well but there is hopelessness. A good read Try to read poetry of famous English poets to refine your expression. KEEP IT UP

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