Blind Date Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Blind Date

Rating: 5.0


She answered
each question
(never asking one of her own)
monosyllabically

'Yes.'
'No.'
'...don't know? '
or didn't say anything at all.

(Everyone else was having a ball.)
It was like dropping a leaky bucket into a very deep well &
winching it painfully up bit by bit to get a mere dropp of moisture.

I was wishing
I had stayed at home
& watched my washing
go 'round & then again around

my mind on
a slow spin
and wishing I had
put some Comfort in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucianne Fasolo 21 October 2007

Very clever, indeed. I liked it very much, :)

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Oh, clever ending! (That's a brand name of fabric conditioner, non-UK people) . I'm guessing this isn't the lucky lady you married? :) t x

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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