Blessings Poem by Navjyot Chandnani

Blessings



No i am not a failure but i fear
An unpleasant emotion causing threat
I failed, but never lost hope
I fear god Oh yes, i do fear i fear losing my family, i fear losing my best friends
I fear this cruel world out there which tends to be more selfish day by day,
I fear writing, coz you may or may not be appreciated
I fear relations, Coz when those break they hurt more than breaking of bones and make one feel numb
Well there are many things to fear anything in excess tends to be poisonous
Plenty of knowledge plenty of happiness
Plenty of sadness tends to be more dangerous
The only thing which over comes fear is BLESSINGS and ones HOPE.
Blessings of your family blessings of god
A blessing a favour or a gift bestowed by god
I fear losing a blessing, it is said when you lose one blessing another is often most unexpectedly given in its place.
So don't lose HOPE, have FAITH, BELIVE thou, be PEACEFUL towards everything and be THANKFUL.

Sunday, August 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: blessing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menato San 15 August 2016

Nice. Thanks for sharing

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Kelly Kurt 14 August 2016

I would recommend not abbreviating words, especially with slang (Instead of 'Coz, write, 'Because) and not capitalizing words for emphasis. I am always impressed when someone can write well in a second language. Keep practicing and posting, Navjyot

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Kelly Kurt 14 August 2016

Many do not fully appreciate what they already have. Thanks, Navjyot

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