Black Mist Poem by Ichigo Tachibana

good poem its dark........

This is great. I love it. Well done. :) ~Riku

interesting piece indeed, I like short and to the point pieces, probably cause I have a hard time writing them.

The poem is well written, and i like it. The message of the poem is enough to express what life's journey all about- the how we live life. To face the who and the what we are is not easy it will couse us pain or even rejection but the truth is, lfe is up and down, night and say till we pass through the door of death to life. Black Mist is a reality...at times we are lost, life seems no meaning at all, but love my friend will bring us back to the light; faith my friend will guide us to right path; hope my friend for what is before us is a challenge on how to savor life's beauty.

It is like to give up all hopes but yes, black mist everywhere and perhaps we never see light again.