Black Hole Poem by alicia cross
Black Hole
Crawling out from the pitch black,
Being thrust upon more darkness;
Maintaining a comatose state,
I begun to fall beyond all my strengths of recognition;
feeling as if I'm in an eternal black hole,
Appearing to be forgotten;
Awakening in the past,
Realizing it can not last;
Creeping beside the seed of me,
Thinking of what I am to be;
Remembering who I am and why I'm here,
For the future is what I only fear;
1-6-09(First poem this year)
This is a curious little poem. My favorite lines are: Creeping beside the seed of me, Thinking of what I am to be. There is a definite fear of the future coming out in this poem. It is almost the poetry equivolent of doing the Michael Jackson moonwalk through life. A very enjoyable read.10/10.
loved the way you opened thi one up but the last 2 lines were my favorite. i cant wait to read more
The heavily massed black hole of fear has grasped our lives in such a way that inner light has diminished but yet one should be pragmatic and optimistic.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 7:56:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Whoa, the darkness folded in your poem is engulfing the truth about our future... this is going to be one of my favourites! Excellent job, write more! 10