Black Balloon Poem by reina Lorenzo

Black Balloon

Rating: 5.0


Little mind hangin’, thinking
Self pity, trying hard to be strong
Oh, there’s a wonderful place she have never seen,
Disneyland! !

“there’s a black balloon flyin’ from the sky
I wanna know how it makes you fly
Cuz I wanna fly
As high as you are”
She screamed.

Black balloon simply fell down
A tear fell from her eyes
Oh! How hard she swept away
(whisperin’)
“this couldn’t be”


oh there’s a black balloon flyin’ from the sky
i wanna know how it makes you fly
cuz shi wanna fly
as high as you are
but,
she scream no more…

2/16/03

© Reina h. Lorenzo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

Two images in perfect unison...the desire and the reality...she didn't scream a second time...you make your valuable message highly audible here at this place, Reina...imaginative write...10

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Blue Eyes 22 November 2008

i really love the imagery it is fantastic.

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Joseph Poewhit 17 November 2008

Images break in life's ways

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