Marieta Maglas

Bronze Star - 2,519 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Bitter - Poem by Marieta Maglas

She thinks her soul can be free,
She's not a Little Bittern bird,
She sightly imagines she will be.

Her deep blue eye embraces
The unendurable bitterness.
Forbidden love slightly traces

Some love lines on her face.
She smokes her grievances
Deeply infused into her grace.

In the castle of her freezing dreams,
While being bidden for blue roses,
She releases all her fused screams...

She veers to the logical extremes.

Comments about Bitter by Marieta Maglas

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Babatunde Aremu (12/6/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    This is wonderful. Keep writing, pal (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/15/2013 11:03:00 AM)

    A fabulous imaginative poem! I like how u creatively say, 'love lines on her face', hey dat is fantasy paint u giv her. Kudos marieta. Fond greetings too. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 6, 2013

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