Birth Of Some Moment. Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Birth Of Some Moment.

Rating: 5.0


The dark hour.
Pitch black.
The night sparks,
with sudden stars.
With a glory unattained,
the night-shroud whispers
to the tumultuous ocean,
a longing unknown.
Breaks from the unfathomable darkness,
chaos of a roaring dawn.
stamping its thump
in this lonely night sky.
An endeavour
to sweep the earth off its feet.
Leaps of joy,
in the boundless ocean.
the cumulative sorrow, a burden unshed,
smothered in a second.
All that was,
vanishes…
for all that is, to come.
and thus ends a creation,
to create the uncreated.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maitreyee Joshi 16 June 2009

i simply love this, freshens up like the dawn! superb! 110++++

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Maitreyee Joshi 16 June 2009

this goes to my favoutites

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Brishti Mazumdar 28 June 2009

and thus ends a creation, to create the uncreated. ...liked it very much...10+.... Brishti

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Anjali Sinha 22 June 2009

wowwwwwwwwwww beautiful birth of this very moment lovely -10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 June 2009

very beautiful...creative thoughts.. brilliant idea flowing....impressive i love this piece..all the lines are captivating... beautiful birth of a new moment.. beautifully described.. 10+++ lovelots, maia

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Kesav Easwaran 18 June 2009

The birth of a dawning moment...creative write Sarvesh...thanks...10

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Indira Babbellapati 16 June 2009

what's the birth of a moment vis-a-vis the cosmic scheme...you have all the unverse involved in your 'birth of some moment! '

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