Birds In The Clouds Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Birds In The Clouds

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Who came to me with the monsoon clouds,
Without any thunders only birds' applauds,
Feathers when clapped like palms of a child,
Winds adding something to a love so wild,
Loving, diving, hunting in the naughty lake,
Life may be a dream but at all not fake,
Hunting and sharing the exciting food,
Once again they look in a lovely mood,
The hunting birds your message was read,
My feet were touched by the waves spread,
Don't you see weather in a mini bikini,
Forcing me for a naughty mutiny,
One fish I have hunted, another I see,
Resting her back with a coconut tree,
Birds I shall follow the life you taught,
Just hunting and loving, no third thought.
But did you send this message to the tree,
The stem did it she's smiling I can see.

Birds In The Clouds
Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2016

Monsoon clouds are amazing in imagery. Birds'message is wonderfully read. Following the life taught by imagery is amazing. Very wisely penned poem is shared here.10

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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2016

Each word was the sound-equivalent of an experience, It is mantra, the compulsion to create a mental image....Lovely poem with creative title....100++

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Khalid Saifullah 28 September 2016

So beautiful........................................................

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Nosheen Irfan 28 September 2016

Beautiful write from your poetic pen. Lovely imagery throughout with a very enticing title.10

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