Bigbigalonebigbig Poem by Alia Ford

Bigbigalonebigbig

Rating: 4.0


you left without a word
this house is so cold
i feel so alone
theres no one else to hold
i gave my heart to you
i thought you loved me too
but oh how i was wrong
i feel so alone

what do i do now
silence seems so loud
can you hear the angry crowd
screaming in an empty town
i can hear every sound
of my wimpered heart pound

i'm in a shallow room
i'm lost without you
tell me what should i do
i'm so twisted and confused

my house is not a home
you left me all alone
can't you hear my tone
what did i do wrong
i feel so alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Burger 11 September 2011

Beautiful, sad, and romantic. This is an amazing poem. Cant wait to read the second

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Ben Burger 11 September 2011

Beautiful, sad, and romantic. This is an amazing poem. Cant wait to read the second

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Romeo Della Valle 05 May 2011

A very well crafted and poignant write! 1+++ Obviously, you have what it takes to make it through the Poetry World, talent! Keep it up and I will always be of assistance if needed! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Joshua Fegley 20 December 2006

What a vehement poem Alia.......take care.

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