Between Two Breath Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Between Two Breath

Rating: 5.0


I reside between your breaths
like the moon between stars
like the waves in the ocean
like the wind passing leaves
like the birds crossing the mountains

You relax between my arms
like the fishes in the pond
like the flowers on the thorns
like the tongue between the teeth

We live together
like the mountains in springtime
like oasis in the desert

Our life is one
like a single soul in two bodies

Just you and me…..

Wednesday, April 20, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical,cute love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 21 April 2022

Single soul in two bodies means love infinity dear poet. This poem teaches me many good metaphors.Brilliant.

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Poetic Sky 21 April 2022

A dream life: Our life is one like a single soul in two bodies....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 April 2022

well Done Doc Well Done

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Just you and me …. Beautiful poem..5 *s

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Suzon Albert 20 April 2022

5,4,3,2,1....Brilliant format. Superb poem.

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