Best Part About Me Poem by subu pramanik

Best Part About Me

Rating: 5.0


What's the best part about me
He said those eyes to mesmerize
Fancy lips that sets his eyes
And my heart of amazing size
I was flattered and surprised
But still I wasn't content
I wish they knew, they
That one thing I'm good at
That one thing for which
I deserve a pat
Probably not the best, but
I guess I'm a bit good at
That best part about me
I wish that somebody
Would see

Sunday, December 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suby Pramanik 05 December 2016

Thank you so much...appretiate ur support :-)

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Suby Pramanik 05 December 2016

Glad u liked it

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Siddartha Montik 05 December 2016

a Golden Heart! Nice and beautiful Suspense! neatly written Thank you for sharing! 10+++

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2016

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Subu.

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