Being Poem by Melmar Mercado

Being

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Unique things that born on earth,
They can walk with two feet
And hold with another,
They can talk, they can think,
They can do unbelievable things,
They can imagine out world things.

As they come everything changed,
Wild forest turned to urban cities,
Peaceful paradise became troublesome places,
Clean air become polluted,
Water causes illness,
Green environment became black.

This way how they think,
Often thinks of something helpful,
Most think how to become wealthy,
Least are selfless, much were selfish,
Little amount thinks for others,
Most think for their own sake.

Least trust God,
Lots trust money,
Some prays for happy life,
Others prayed for a rich one.
Some prayed for a complete family,
Others prayed for a wealthy.

Which will you prefer?
A greedy and wealthy life,
Or a happy and complete one,
A long and happy,
Or a short and wealthy,
Your decision matters,
What this world will be.

You know what I pertain,
Where you think you're belong.
Whatever you chose,
Be sure you can hold,
Or else you'll regret,
Everything that'll happen.

Wednesday, June 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: attitude,human being,mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 June 2017

They can do unbelievable things, Peaceful paradise became troublesome places, Least are selfless, much were selfish Where you think you're belong. Very interesting poem. depicting your great mind. These are the points that i collected from your poem. Thank you dear poet.

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Melmar Mercado 30 June 2017

thanks for your comment, I appreciate it

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