Because Of You Poem by moriah zentz

Because Of You



Because of u I'm happy
because of u my heart has changed
because of u i can feel
because of u i forget all the sh** that I've went through
because of u i can relax
because of u i can love
because of u i can feel the good things in people
because of u i can laugh without a joke
because of u i'm a better person
because of u i can cry
because of u i me
because of u, i love u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 09 February 2009

I like the repetition that is used in poems. It helps with the memory of the poem. BECAUSE OF YOU will have a memory in the mind of the reader. This is great. So, the structure is ideal for this. This is a nice love poem. Not too long. Just about right. Nice job! GW62

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