Beauty Of An Evening Poem by shyam balaji

Beauty Of An Evening

Rating: 4.7


On an evening spring,
euphony from a guitar string,
maple leaves shed from trees.
yellow ground and a gracious breeze.

People view scenes that trends,
joyous with family and frenz.
Birds chirp the melodious notes,
sitting over lamplight posts.

Shining sun concealed behind hills.
dark clouds pour down glassy drizzles.
Little flowers blossom on the riverside,
water moves gracefully beside.

Bluish sky turns red-orange colour,
incomes a candy odour.
moon from farside says a hi.
welcoming the stary night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maddy White-dove 16 February 2010

hey! thats a really beautiful poem. very descriptive! i can actually visualize these scenes! !

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Supriya Prathapan 10 March 2009

Brilliant imagery! ! ! !

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Sabrina Jubahar 30 December 2008

well described. I like this piece a lot! !

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Its Me 29 December 2008

hey hi shyam...thank u so much fr ur comments...well ur hav gr8 writing skills too...a very well written poem....

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 28 December 2008

Ah, how lovely. You seem to really love life. THat's what it takes to be a great poet.

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shyam balaji

shyam balaji

coimbatore (now in chennai) ..
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