Beaten Poem by London Turner

Beaten

Rating: 5.0


I see this girl
beautiful on every way
her face so perfect
her heart almost a full grey
no one can tell that
she lives that way
being beaten at times
her dad thought was okay
and what am i to do
i cant tell for shell be sent away
to cps or a foster home
so here she stays
returning to school with many bruises
more appearing each day
i said i was sorry
and quickly had him put away
hes in jail now
and my friends okay
no one would ever guess
whats shes been through to this very day.
(6-23-09)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Unanue 25 June 2009

I honestly hope that you are not basing this off of yourself.

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~ Jon London ~ 25 June 2009

heart felt and honest piece to share, on a topic most would not cover...you have done this well....fine write

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i understand read my poem 'they look at dad' great poem 110% Unique

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