Be Blessed Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

Be Blessed

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Be blessEd

It's true
He felt blue
Sniffed glue
To feel cool
Drank brew
With his crew
Then drooled
Women he knew
At the pool
Like a fool

At school
Nothing understood
A stooge
Up to no good
Ready to goof
Always rude
The dude
Even nude
Wanted to exude
His brood

In his hood
No broom
To cleam room
But wanted new
A groom
Not a bridegroom
A goon
Like Robin Hood
He would
Hide in the wood

Sounds familiar?
Sounds peculiar?
Gone are the days
Change your ways
Pray
Say
I may
One day
Obey
Be blessEd

Saturday, October 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: change
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 24 October 2020

Change is the best But is who to change Me, you or who. Often this fight Ruin life Me, you or who. Accomodation works Middle way on search Me, you or who.

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

A poet in you is restless with bubbling ideas. You have written quite a few poems on different subjects today and I am happy to see this change....change in your poem and change of messages. Great one my friend. But don't change your engineering mind with anything else.5********

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