Bathing In The Waters Of The Heavens Poem by Li'l One

Bathing In The Waters Of The Heavens

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I hear it before I see it
Pounding loudly
Drumming wildly
My heart wants to join in
I want to run naked through it
Feel the droplets pounding my skin
Bathing in the waters of the heavens

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 April 2008

i can't wait to be in there..............really i am.................

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rajagopal haran 06 November 2007

poem in a nut shell; great

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Meggie Gultiano 06 October 2007

This is nice, Emmalene..lovely and short hugs, Meggie

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Vincent James Turner 13 June 2007

what a lovely title Emmalene, and as for the poem it too is a wonderful basic human desire too run out and bathe in the waters of heaven. I think this poem works becuase it strikes an accord with many and the images are nice. best wishes Robin

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Colin J... 13 June 2007

Emmalene, this is a lovely poem, short and to the point, There is nothing more beautiful than warn, refreshing rain. Keep bathing, Colin J...

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