Back To You Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Back To You

Rating: 5.0


A woodland place of all things pleasing
Soft green grass that moves with the breeze,
Those melancholy sounds, are so appealing
Of wild, free birds upon the trees.

This small place, breathes life before me
Flowers grow each place i tread,
The soft glow of the morning sunshine
Thoughts of you are in my head.

For here we walked, those distant summers
Taking in the morning air,
If only time could take me to you,
Back in life when you were there.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 13 June 2023

Reminisces of LEAVES OF GRASS. Walt Whitman would be proud. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem, Jayne.

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Thank you Richard for your lovely comment : )

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Nabakishore Dash 11 June 2023

Platonic love written brilliantly.

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Thanks for your kind comment : ) x

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Sheeya Hacks 11 June 2023

Ver well written poem. FIVE STARS

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Thank you so much Sheeya : ) x

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Thank you so much Sheeys

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Esselebor Ebhojie 10 June 2023

Nostalgic drama, I really felt connected to the grass, breeze and sunshine

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Thank you Esselebor : ) Much appreciated x

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Suzon Albert 10 June 2023

To return signifies many a things to me. Good poem, Keep writing such poems, dear.5**

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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