(10-25-1974 / Houston)

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Baby

Baby let me tell u how I feel
Baby let me love u till the end
Baby my heart is urs
Baby let me touch u all over
Baby can I kiss ur lips
Baby can I rub ur feet
Baby look me in my eyes and don't blink
Baby when the sun goes down will u be around
Baby let's walk the hall of love
Baby when I look at u I see another world in ur eyes
Baby I'm tha man that can take u where u need and want to go
Baby please let's go and don't say no
Baby this is my last cry
Baby make love to me till the end of time

Baby

Submitted: Tuesday, January 08, 2008


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  • Cynthia Buhain-Baello (2/17/2010 9:19:00 AM)

    I wonder why your poem is exactly the same (to the letter) as one written in 2008 by a certain Ralph Acosta -both posted in the poems under 'baby' category.

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  • Jackie QUERO (10/14/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    nice i love ur poem is more than nice

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  • Mo Mdeeq (6/22/2009 6:10:00 AM)

    woww, , i love this peom..they are nice and easy to understand

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  • Charlie Paino (3/9/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    Now this is coming from a girl!
    ................Hmmmmmmm...................
    Ummmmmm........well..ah..done....hm
    good job.....yeh! ! ! ! !

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  • Tiffany Reeves (11/6/2008 2:37:00 PM)

    this is an awesome poem. i love it.

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  • Lavon Clayton (5/2/2008 7:45:00 AM)

    I love ur poems they are so real and so deep

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