Awake Poem by Deborah Cromer
Awake
It takes one thought to begin a dream
Reality and fantasy together to form a team
Some of this and some of that, it is clear
Acting upon each other, with nothing to fear
One step forward to begin each new day
All senses alive at once do play
The mind is awake with too much time to see
Looking and searching, begging to be set free
Trapped and holding on, never to let go
We travel daily from the high to the low
Reality n fantasy to mingle For the soul to merrily jingle for your face to bathe in glow In evry moment frm high 2 low
A thought is like a dot.. it converges to make a whole thing! Very inspirational!
very musical and moving great write Deb :)
Nice rythmn and rhyming. Dreams we have do reflect our lives, I prefer to live in present time, and reflect on how life is going.
Analytical though the last line is confusing me a little...nice theme10
WOW! ..It takes one thought to begin a dream Reality and fantasy together to form a team.. Great tablet indeed to cure ample people suffering with ailment from unfulfilled dream. 10+++
Very short, but yet a confidence poem that we will keep on living and need to live and not cower
The journey of life leads in many directions. This is a lovely piece Deborah, very well written. Best wishes, Andrew
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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a poem is born a theory enunciated a song sung, a sonnet forgotten just termini of thought….. it meanders; moves forms new ruts irrigate new lands sauté hearts anew and sing new songs thought moves on