Autumn Musing Poem by Ben Gieske

Autumn Musing

Rating: 3.0


I smell the autumn leaves a burnin'
and see the lazy smoke arisin'
across the valley it's a spreadin'.
I love this hazy, lazy feelin'.

The sun is reddened and a settin'.
The air is coolin' in Mt. Vernon.
It's long since I been to Mt. Vernon
and smelt the autumn leaves a burnin'.


(Feb.1972)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 October 2007

This is definitely an 'olfactory' poem - the smoke really gets into the nostrils of the reader, as does the easy flow of the piece with its loping gait and its comfortable laid-back images. Gorgeous poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Goldy Locks 09 September 2007

quite apt, for this time of year. carefree, whimsical... Reminds me of cowboys & girls ridin' horses into the red sunset. best care, sjg

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