August Afternoon Poem by Glen Kappy

August Afternoon



from 'While Passing Through'/Summer

August afternoon
cicadas droning—
the sound of waiting.

Friday, August 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: august,day,insects,sound,summer,summer time ,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 12 August 2017

I love the cicada sound in August, it is both soaring and subliminal. And you got it just right in calling it the sound of waiting, it takes away all ambition and I can see now it replaces such drive with waiting. That is, the event; we don't know yet what the content is.

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Glen Kappy 12 August 2017

yes, the cicada drone- especially in august before the school year starts- feels to me a liminal sound. in general i'm fascinated by such things- the way, for example, edward hopper in his paintings managed to make us wonder, what's next? -glen

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Fabrizio Frosini 12 August 2017

as a kigo, cicadas ['simi'] is traditionally linked to late Summer, therefore you could drop 'August', trying a variation.. for instance: ''cicadas droning— / the sound of waiting through a / still afternoon'' ;)

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Glen Kappy 12 August 2017

many of us here in america, all of us at one time students, and then those of us who returned to a school schedule as teachers, have associations with august (before school starts up again) which make me feel, in this case, it's important to keep. two other poems i've written recently, late july and last day in july are variations- all which include the so-human feeling of time fleeting while we tread in the water that is our lives. -glen

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Shakil Ahmed 11 August 2017

Nice haiku, well composed poem, thanks a lot for sharing.

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Glen Kappy 11 August 2017

You're welcome, Shakil. And thank you for your comment. -Glen

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