At Sea Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

At Sea

Rating: 2.5


A pirate lost at sea
Left twisted for loves beauty
Every floating wave a sweet harmmony
Haveing only a wish to the stars far away
To take back the words that destroyed desteny
Leaveing his ship sad and lonely
With his heart shackled and chained in his gally
Unhoastered his pistol with one shot
Left the old wood floor bloody

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

I like this one good job. the ending got me I didnt think that was going to happen though. It is very good. *Purkey Girl*

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Tyease Collins 25 September 2008

Beautiful poem. Absolutely beautiful. I love how short it is =] ^_~ <33 -Tess The Indian Princess

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Amber ... 21 September 2008

good poem

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