At Old Age Home Poem by M. Asim Nehal

At Old Age Home

Rating: 5.0

In an old age home, a tale of a young girl unfolds,
her eyes filled with tears and her heartache untold.
Her parents kept it clandestine and held their lips tight,
Until the school took the students to the old age home site.

The sky came crushing down, when she discovered her grandma,
sitting quietly and praying, all alone in dilemma.
For years, they'd been living in their own worlds totally unaware,
One in the old age home, and one in despair.

The girl's emotions overflowed like a stream,
When she saw her grandmother's eyes, like a fading gleam.
She was too young to understand, how grandma reached here
Nothing could console her, grief, pain, sorrow and fear.

Her parents, busy and driven by their strife,
Could hardly care for her dear grandma's life.
But now, the truth was unveiled, crystal clear,
And it pierced her heart, instilling deep fear.

How could they let her suffer, all alone,
In the confines of the old age home?
The girl's love for her grandma surged in full,
As she embraced her in an eternal pull.

With every touch, she felt the love so deep,
A bond restored, a promise to keep.
Through tears and whispers, they shared their embrace,
A newfound connection, in this sacred place.

The old age home, once filled with muted sound,
Now echoed laughter, as love was found.
For in the midst of loneliness and decay,
A granddaughter's love, like a sun's warm ray.

At Old Age Home
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
While going through one of the articles on Old age home, the story touched my heart and I felt the ache of the girl who noticed her grandma sitting quitely in one corner, her parents never revealed the truth instead they said she is staying with some other relatives. Due credit to the photographer.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 22 August 2023

A very touchy poem, human emotions are uncontrolable in certain situation and I too flowed with the poem.

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Juhaina Tumlu 22 August 2023

I know what a child goes through when encountered with such emotional bonding. A lesson for everyon in your poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

Absolutely heart moving! .. And ever so beautifully touching! .. Praise God her and her Grandmother found each other! ..

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 August 2023

A very heart touching poem. Beautifully crafted. We have turned so selfish. We treat our parents as burdens once they become old. Nice ink.

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Sheeya Hacks 23 August 2023

A touchy Poem with free flow of emotions.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 August 2023

This beautiful poem reminds me of watching my mother die in hospice. Bravo! ! ! TFS

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

Thank you so much for sharing this with your readers! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

An ever ever so inspirational write! .. Magnificent! .. Beyond #ING! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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