Ashes Poem by Hanh My Nguyen

Ashes



What can I see now
I hear no sound
You pay me your silence
Are my words forgotten

Why I am blind
Either I can't cry
We're pulled far
All we could see were our memoried stars

I gave up the game
But never to my flame
Burned endlessly
Breathed passionately

Waves are running
Till mute they sing
The song of lasting
The tune which's never ending

Coming from an un-named world
I had so many duels
Weren't you unfair to me
Didn't you plan to be

I can't stand fighting
Since I've lost my ring
Somewhere in my coast
Ridicules wore your coat

Come back here
Even anymore you're not my dear
Return to salut
Let away our old mood

I'm bursting into sands
Passing through your hands
Ashes luxuriate your lens
Give our love an end

I see emotion's ending
I hear heart's crying
I pay you quiet
Certainly! Your words are died

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 27 June 2009

its sooo sweet poem..well written and seems professiaonlly doem with rich idea... like your flow of poetry you do..and its melodious one... well done 10++++++++++

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