indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

As The Vacant Pendant Hangs Loosely - Poem by indira babbellapati

sad eyes
afraid eyes
stare far into
empty space

the vacant pendant
hangs around the expectant neck
every wind chime
charging her with hope
Where is he?
where is he?
Moans the heart

Sun scatters its light
Through the stone pendant;
light slowly fading...

Sad eyes
Afraid eyes
Staring into blank space
For the one who never returns!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

June 12,5: 10 PM

Comments about As The Vacant Pendant Hangs Loosely by indira babbellapati

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (7/13/2013 4:15:00 AM)

    the poet's notes look significant, don't they? you are the feminist of the modern times!
    the figure in the poem is search-incarnate! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,764 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/11/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    Vacant pendant hanging loosely around expectant neck. Beautiful image of anticipation. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 191 Points Jenie Franksay (7/9/2013 2:26:00 AM)

    good write.
    i invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 9, 2013

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