As If We Are Adam And Eve Poem by Asif Andalib

As If We Are Adam And Eve

Rating: 3.3


As if we are Adam and Eve
Our sorrows do not want to leave!

Our tears fall like rivers from mountain
Has anyone else has such a pain?

Our sighs are like gusty wind of monsoon
A sin has taken away life’s best boon!

I haven’t got chance to taste your kiss
Our smiles have gone like lost memories!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ralph The Elf 05 May 2012

this is really good but a little length and detail would have given you high marks well done

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Eman Obied 04 May 2012

that is what a pure love poem should sound like so honest and enchanting

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Dave Walker 04 May 2012

An emotion packed poem. Like it, a great write.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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