As I Lay Here Slowly Dying Poem by lonely lover

As I Lay Here Slowly Dying

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As I lay here slowly dying because of all your lying I think of you I can't keep from crying.
All the things you said I believed them to be true especially when you said I was the only one for you.
The promises you made all were in vain to keep you from being slain. All the pain was only for your gain you made it seem so real even if you didn't really feel.
To you this was just a game a way for you to mame and make me feel shame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 13 May 2009

Words put forth much feeling. KEEP TRUCKIN

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Marie L 13 May 2009

This is my first actual poem I am just looking for advice and opnions good or bad thank you

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