Arrows Released Poem by Doris Cornago

Arrows Released

Rating: 5.0


Our
Vow of
Honesty
Is like rain
Could make
Both insane
Cause urgent
Pain, yet urges
Disambiguation
Clearer direction
Arrows released
Goals screeched
Gates breached
Walking freely
Hands hold
Hearts own
Hurts are
Scarred
Slowly
Gone

Arrows Released
Wednesday, June 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: arrow,battle,beautiful,children,gates,goals,pain,relationship,wounds
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
You can strike me down but you can never put me down because I have a goal to reach and a battle to win. Although wounded, I will persevere because my children are holding my hand and their hearts are my own. We may be wounded but we do not die, our hopes outlast even our existence. This poem is for brave moms and children who hold on to their mom's hand. Mothers are superhuman in their children's eyes. Moms also need a superman but only in secret.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 21 June 2018

I don; t know what I liked the most.The poem or the picture! Well.both!

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Doris 22 June 2018

Well, better if both. Thank you for appreciation, Kostas. Children could also mean those who we take under our wing and share our beliefs with. They are arrows for the world. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 June 2018

Doris, such an impressive write....10++++

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Doris Cornago 21 June 2018

Thank you, bro. Bernard. :)

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Doris Cornago 20 June 2018

Like arrows in the hands of a warrior are children born in one's youth.

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