Animals...Man? Poem by Matt Teaford

Animals...Man?



Oh, the cruelty of men,
The greatest of our sin,
Putting others in a pen,
Holding high our chin,
Never looking where we've been,
Since only god knows when,
Killing our own kin,
With a crooked grin,
We are animals...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Taylor Davis 05 June 2010

I love it. I would take out the 'We are animals...' at the end, 1. because it kind of breaks the flow of the poem, and 2. because the title means the same thing, but is stronger.

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Matt Teaford

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