Angels Poem by Hayley Foster

Angels

Rating: 4.8


angels gather all around
angels down here on the ground
angels wings are white and frail
angels won't sing there hearts to hell
angels sad and
angels mad
angels may not sing again
angels fly up to the sky
to see a place that we recognize
so angels smile across the day
and when night comes they
hit the hay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Singer 18 November 2008

very welll written i liked it

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Jay Boyd 21 October 2008

I like the repetitions but the ending was bland.

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, aryaindia 08 September 2008

The split up of lines can be redone to give a better effect. But the overall worth of the poem is not undermined. Blessings.

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