And The Moon Smiled Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

And The Moon Smiled

Rating: 4.6


In tiptoeing tiny steps
I came to you
to pluck your soul.

You found me, hugged,
kissed, squeezed my lips.

Then..
plucked your soul to give me
and the moon smiled.

(True love experience is always a mystery.
“The smile of the moon” - the mild golden light of the moon that falls in the garden on the riverbanks was always mysterious for me) .

And The Moon Smiled
Thursday, August 26, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 27 August 2010

Spare, elegant lines inviting to deep meditation..more than deserving of tens.Thank you for sharing

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Terence George Craddock 28 August 2010

and the moon smiled. a lovers moon, bringing the timid tiny footsteps of love to fruition, upon the lips of the beloved

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Gita Ashok 03 September 2010

By personifying the Moon, you have portrayed a lovely picture of true love.

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Gita Ashok 03 September 2010

By personifying the Moon, you have portrayed a lovely picture of true love.

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Malini Kadir 19 January 2014

very romantic..........touched the soul.... en route......

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Prabir Gayen 13 May 2019

Deep love poem......... beautiful.....thanks

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 October 2018

Oh! this is extraordinary........beauty lies in smiles of moon upon staring at souls in love divine.......Dr. Tony......many thanks for sharing these beautiful and memorable poems....10+++++++

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Skarpathiotaki Mary 06 January 2018

Hmmm my favour theme the moon ...i like it 10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 22 October 2017

I came to you to pluck your soul.Full of romanticism.Nicely crafted poem.

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Noreen Carden 19 February 2014

Very beautiful poem then plucked your soul to give me and the moon smiled really terrific line Beautifully written and a lovely read well done to you

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